Petwoip's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Evol!

Haha, this song is pure grime! Sounds like a talking robot that was just short-circuited. I like your inclusion of the soundbyte from Reality Check.

cornandbeans responds:

haha it's from an old eazy e track dude ;) i love the song you're talking about though

[.:{[(arkticat)]}:. Dnb Dnb Dnb]

Nice

You gotta stop fading in and out! But anyway, I enjoyed the beginning a lot. You introduced the distorted drums well, I just wish you gradually made the backgrounds pads become a little distorted as well. The rest of the song is really interesting neurofunk. Maybe use that pots 'n' pans snare a little less often. It starts to sound a tad repetitious. Also, I'm interested to see how a somewhat slower tempo would would sound like (sort of like what the drums do in the beginning with the pads). Finally, it would be nice if you made the song longer and perhaps put the strings back in at some point (you sort of do, but not enough). I'm so used to ~6 minuted dnb that the song feels criminally short.

Besides all those suggestions, I really like the mastering and the general feel of the song. A very enjoyable listen!

landscapers1 responds:

Thanks a lot, sir : )
Yes I might continue this song... a day...

[Homesick (DEMO)]

Need more!

The beginning was so great that I waited for it to resurface near the end. But since this is a demo, I'm not too worried. I love the happy vibe the song gives out. In the middle, I feel like some notes are the wrong length (either that or there is too much emphasis on each new note). Besides that, I love what you have going here. Sounds like Deadmau5, but in some ways better!

landscapers1 responds:

Thanks man! I really apreciate it! yeah it's a demo and I understand you because 30% of demo songs uploaded on the AP sounds unfinished in fact...
So DON'T WORRY the whole song is +7min length ;)

[Hypnose (WIP)]

Decent

Definitely a hybrid of Noisia / Spor. Though, I feel everything needs more OOMPH. The drum needs to kick harder, the bass needs to be more pronounced, etc. the mastering needs work, and it especially shows when that record scratch comes in much louder than the rest. Still, decent song.

landscapers1 responds:

The entire song will be more OOMPH.

[Paper Planes (DnB Remix)]

There's something terribly wrong...

Quite simply. the bass had nothing to do with the rest of the song. It sounded rushed (compared to the slower-paced paper planes), it ate away the rest of the sounds as if you slapped it right over the music and put it at max volume, and it had no musical contribution. I am a heavy DnB listener, and I can tell you the bass is wrong. It would have made a lot more sense to do a dubstep remix of the song. I did, however, enjoy the parts when you put the drums behind those gunshots from the song.

Alexmac22347 responds:

I guess some people like it and some don't... Thx for the review anyways :) at least there were some parts you enjoyed

[SpK*) - Blaze]

I like the sound, by the song lacks.

I like the instruments you chose and the dark d'n'b elements, but I feel the song ends up going nowhere.

Spikrodd responds:

well it is a loop after all... lol

[Viewtiful-Chip]

So...

Did you press your program's random button? It sounds like it.
There's really no melody here, and the samples sound terrible (I know they're intentionally 8-bit).
I think you need a different program, or maybe some more time commitment in order to produce better music.

Viewtiful-Chris responds:

I placed every note with every virtual instrument and it took me a few hours to do so and refine it.

No randomness whatsoever.

Yes, there is a melody, you just don't get it.

Chip music is an acquired taste... I guess...

[I'd Rather be Flying]

You are awesome

I like how it sounds very relaxing. The progression is good throughout. And also, it sounded great in the game Ongaku.

Turning-Japanese responds:

It is pretty relaxing isn't it? Thanks for your comment!

[Helix - No. 6]

Best Industrial Song!

I was glancing around the Industrial section, disappointed at the sub par songs on the top. Then I come to your song, knowing it will be 10 times better than the rest.

I've always liked this song and even included it in a game of mine. Great work!

Helix6 responds:

I don't know about "Best," but I don't know what the hell else you would call it but "Industrial."

[PSO|Jungle Theme Remix]

Good

I liked this. It sounded great with the heavy bass and drums. The notes were good, except for one part with the almost- happy bass. The song had great transitions, and the pads were excellent. I like how they made the song spooky, with a slighty airy feel to it.

The beginning was excellent, setting the mood for the song perfectly.

I believe you could have included some extremely heavy drums at a few parts in the middle of the song, right after the leading- up instrument came in.

Overall very good. Not really the most enjoyable song to listen to, but it was made very well.

4/5

Feel free to check out my music

D-A-J responds:

Heh, thx for that long review... longest in a while now...

well anyways, i hope you are right, cause i have just submitted this tune for OC Remix, so maybe it will be shown there too? :)