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New game: Song Stages! Also check out "Mouse Evader". Both made with my brother Sean (Sebby64). Listen to my music too.
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I liked this. It sounded great with the heavy bass and drums. The notes were good, except for one part with the almost- happy bass. The song had great transitions, and the pads were excellent. I like how they made the song spooky, with a slighty airy feel to it.
The beginning was excellent, setting the mood for the song perfectly.
I believe you could have included some extremely heavy drums at a few parts in the middle of the song, right after the leading- up instrument came in.
Overall very good. Not really the most enjoyable song to listen to, but it was made very well.
4/5
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Author's Response:
Heh, thx for that long review... longest in a while now...
well anyways, i hope you are right, cause i have just submitted this tune for OC Remix, so maybe it will be shown there too? :)
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"Much better than yesterday!"
I liked this song much better. It was fuller, had a nice chorus, and the song progressed as it went on.
The instruments were better as well. The main lead was nice.
However, some parts went on a bit longer than they should have there could have been more note variety seeing that one main series of notes played the whole time.
Try to spend more time on your songs and they will become more and more interesting.
4/5
Author's Response:
ok man,and thanx for the interesting review
gonna check out some of ya songs
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Really nice song. I love the melodic pieces of yours so much! Sounds kind of like Skid Row at a couple parts.
Keep up the great work!
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Tracks like this do not deserve a 2.50/5.00 and only 4 downloads. This song should be on the top 50 for Trance.
I like your use of many different synths, and how all the different parts are brought together. The song flowed unusually well, with little mistakes or problems.
The mastering was excellent as well, excpet I didn't like your use of the filter to end the song.
Overall a great song to listen to! Keep up the good work!
5/5- and feel free to check out my music.
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Wow, this song really shone! The instruments come together very nicely and form a very soothing and quiet melody that really stands out.
Like many others, I could picture a story/setting while hearing this song.
And just for curiosity's sake, what program did you use to compose this song?
5/5 Download! Feel free to check out my music.
Author's Response:
I used Fruity Loops to make these songs, but the sounds you're hearing have little to do with the program itself. If you'd like send me a pm and i'll tell you about VST's, the plug-ins I use to make these sounds.
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Wow, you are a really great guitar player! You chose a great melody to play it to and your solo was amazing! You continue to surprise me with your music!
On a seperate note, recently I picked up a copy of flash and I am planning on using classic roots in it. However, can you do me a favor as to make a long fade from the 1:30 point to the 1:45 or so point. Thank you so much! My email is petwoip@yahoo.com if you don't know what I mean or if you are sending the edited copy.
5/5- and a download!
Author's Response:
Um Sure thing, Just Add me to msn: ericzbenaim@hotmail.com
And we'll talk over there so you can tell me what you want.
Thanks btw!
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This is such a great song. I can picture myself dancing to this every time I hear it. It has such a clear sound to it with such a great melody that never gets old! The instruments were top knotch: drums, leads, everything.
I would like to know your e-mail adress to get the better quality version. My email is petwoip@yahoo.com.
Keep up the great work, this is an awesome song!
5/5- feel free to check out my music.
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Piano... Guitar... the melodies are so amazing!
With those voices (which I can't exactly make out), you have created a superb piece of music that has moved me in a way. I congratulate you on this great song!
I will download this for sure, and you'll get a 5/5 from me!
Feel free to check out my music.
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I liked how this song was so smooth and relaxed, but it was way to short to be submitted. I feel you could have expanded a bit more on the song.
The drums were pretty good, but they never really changed throughout the song. The backround pad was very good, it set the mood for the song. The piano couldve used a little work, but it isn't bad. The notes could have been more diverse.
And I know this was a short song, so it would be hard to do everything I said.
All in all, this song would be very good to listen to to clear my mind- it was an enjoyable listen.
4/5- Feel free to check out my music.
And btw BeAtBrEaKeR127, sometimes one has to give their songs fives. You can see how low the rest of his songs are, and without those 5's they would be even lower.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for all of the constructive feedback man! I truly do appreciate reviews like this! And about that, I don't vote 5's on my songs unless they get downrated a lot because i know my music isn't 0 material.... well not the newer stuff lol, the older stuff i dont care about man. But in regards to the song being short, I made this one pretty fast so your rating of 5 for the effort was very accurate! I honestly didn't feel that the beat needed changing though, it was just to bring the song together pretty much. And the piano I agree, could have definately used work lol. I thank you very much for your review, and I will definately listen in to some of your music!
-Alyk
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Wow, what a dark and eerie song! I liked the overall sound of the song with all the loud drums and piercing notes. However, I don't really like those squeaks.
Very atmospheric and dark- and original too!! Good job!
9/10 -- 5/5
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Author's Response:
thx for the review and dark and eerie is what i went for in this song glad you liked it
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