Good Job
Dude, you have really great tunes, but you have got to expand them. For example this song could really be something great if you worked to make it longer and added some other instruments (even if the theme is a lonely piano solo).
Well, good job!
WOW
That was SUCH a good song! It was so relaxing and had a very smooth flow. I just sat back, relaxed, and enjoyed the music. Another interesting thing was it was the first song I heard on my new surround sound system :)
Keep these great songs up! And also, what program do you use? Feel free to check out my music.
Good song!
I enjoyed this song a lot. I have some pointers, but I also have a lot of praise.
+ By introducing the violins the way you did, it seemed awkward, maybe they should have been at a lower volume when introduced and then gradually the volume is increased.
+sometimes when you went from one new instrument (or part) to the next, it wasn't very smooth, I'm not sure how you can fix that with the program you have.
+The strings and the brass have pretty bad sound qualities- they sounded fake- try fixing that up if you can.
+the ending was very abrupt, it looped well but you can still make a good loop without ending the song like that.
On to the pros....
+I loved the array of instruments you used, especially the xylophone/marimba thing and the guitar.
+It was a very emotional piece, which is good.
+It has a very nice feel to it, very fun to listen to.
+The notes you used were very good, especially the piano.
The good things about this song outweigh the bad by alot, but just try to work on some of these things. I may have forgotton to say a few things, but by judging the length of this review, I couldn't have missed much. I hope my suggestions work. Best of luck with your future songs. 4.5/5 (5/5 when i rate it)
Feel free to check out some of my music.
thansk for da essay... sorry review. no that really helped. sum of the stuff you mentioned cannot be fixed withg the program i have im the samer age as you and cant really afford profesional stuff. like reason etc.
but ive taken that onboard and ill see if i can do that stuff wid my program which i dont thinki can but thanks for da review.
Great Job!!!
Wow, that was a really good song. Did you mix together live paino with computer created strings and drum backround or was this all made with a program? If so, what program do you use.
When I listened to the song, it just kept getting better and better until it ended [and it ended way too soon :(, it was too abrupt]. In came the drums, which were a nice twist, then theere were two pianos at the same time. I loved it all. This was a very inspiring piece and is worthy of a 5/5, so that's what I'll rate this (and most likely download)
While listening, the piano is so good, it makes the song so sad (which I like alot)
Feel free to check out some of my music!
No program :)... all one small lil Yamaha Keyboard. Just a clever mix of reverbed piano and synth strings. And of course... a looped kit. At one point... their are 3 pianos. This was purely an experiment... that I loved. Thankyou for your review and I'll check out ur music.
LOL
hehe, that stinks, I have no clue how to get it off, maybe you should contact Newgrounds :/
Once again another great song
I loved how the song progressed. The first few timesI heard this song, i stopped listening after about 30 sec., but now that I've heard the whole thing, I'm really starting to like it. this is so cool. You really know how to make good songs! And I know you dont tend to respond to reviews due to your bad english, but can u please tell me how I can make it so the "Your computer is too slow..." doesn't come up. I have reason and I'm making a song, but that always happens at one part in the song. Itmay just be my computer is simply too slow, but I just wanted to see if there was another way.
And if anyone else besides paragonx9 knows how to solve my problem, can they pleas email me at petwoip@yahoo.com
Well, thanks!
petwoip
simply put, that is the coolest drumming i have heard in a DnB song EVER!!!!!!! I especially liked the part before the siren part
Nice job!!
00Nightmare7, he uses Reason 2.5
This song has extremely cool effects! I own Reason and I have no clue how you make them. I liked the second half of the song best, partly because I'm not very fond of how you used the bass in the beginning, it was kind of annoying (but that's my opinion) and because the drumming at the end was so cool!!!
I liked how you made this song using Japanese instruments, very creative!!! Originality 10!
Diversity: It was always changing, the beat, the instruments, etc..... 10
Clarity: I'm not exactly sure what this category means, but if it means the quality of the audio, then 10!
Effort: It's obvious that you put tons of hard work into this song. 10
Overall: 9.5 because I didn't really like the bass in the beginning.
Good job, and continue to make more!!!!
5/5 rating + download
HaHa, Metal Bat.. good name.
Though the guitar got kinda boring because it repeated, the whole song was really great. In fact the guitar riff sounding like something from Doom (I've actually never played the game before, but I have heard a couple Doom remixes on NG.) The drumming was really good, except I think you should have changed it around a bit.
The way you introduced all the elements of the song (the guitar, the bass, and the drums) was really good.
I also really liked that uhhh, can't describe it.... the other sound you had besides the bass, drums, and the guitar. But I didn't like when it carried on during the end, it was slightly annoying.
There are a couple things that could be improved, but overall a good song. 4/5
Feel free to check out any of my new songs.
Yeah, Thanks dude, i also felt it needed to be improved.
Pretty cool
This was really fun to listen to, but it should be longer. Good job though, and it fit well in the flash.
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